Presence Story

Bring a rough draft. Leave with a story that holds up under questions.

The coach critiques your draft against the structure the room actually scores, asks the questions that fill the real gaps, and hands you back a revision in your own words. No invented facts, no invented numbers.

Start your first story, free → Two minutes of setup. No account until you're ready to run the coach. Your first story's free. After that, credits start at $39 for four and never expire.

One story, before and after

Before: the raw draft

"We had a launch date and things kept changing. I had to keep everyone aligned and eventually we shipped, though it wasn't perfect and there were some tense moments along the way."

No task, no decision, no result. The coach flags: action missing, result missing.

After: the revision, STAR

"Two weeks before a fixed launch date, our main integration partner changed their API contract. I owned re-scoping the last sprint without slipping the date. I cut the two lowest-priority features, renegotiated the QA window, and briefed the exec sponsor personally. We shipped on time, with the two cut features following two weeks later with no customer complaints."

Situation, Task, Action, Result. In the user's own words, nothing invented.

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A minute of setup

Role level assigns your target structure, either STAR, STAR+, or four-beat. No guessing which format the room wants.

STAR
Situation, Task, Action, Result. The classic format: tight, concrete, quantified where truthful.
STAR+
STAR plus a reflection beat. For rooms scoring self-awareness and growth, not just execution. (Our term.)
Four-beat
Frame, Risks, Approach, Story. The Story beat is your STAR, compressed. For rooms scoring judgment. (Our term.)

STAR is the industry standard. STAR+ and Four-beat are our extensions of it. STAR is never discarded, it's placed.

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Bring what you have

Paste a draft, notes, or fragments. Free, anonymous, stays on your device until you're ready to run the coach.

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Critique, questions, revision

The coach finds the real gaps, asks for what actually happened, and revises. It never invents a fact or a number.

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